Wednesday, September 21, 2005

47 Reasons I Didn't Become A Cartoonist: Part 9

Do-over

Sometimes I had the good sense to revisit an idea. Interesting to see the improvement in draftsmanship.


SHAKEY'S Pizza Parlor. *sigh* Another fine bit of comedy struck down in the prime of life by a simple spelling error.


Multiple gags, silly incorporated signature, bodily functions...this one's got everything!


A lightly anthropomorphized first stage of a Saturn 5 rocket. Where's the human drama?


Ah! There it is. And look! I've evolved into using word balloons! Interesting that in this one I included all the letters of "Saturn V" on the side, whereas in the first one, the S and part of the A ran off the top. Maybe I had to explain it too many times.

4 comments:

AAM said...

the guy manning the float up pizza window looks vaguely like Beaker!

snusnu said...

So, the shark fixation is obviously not a new thing...

Richmond said...

aha, the evolution of the young artist...very clever.

Man, I miss Shakey's.

Anonymous said...

Don't miss it. GO there.

There are a bunch around. Closest to Mowrer and me, and, in fact, you, is in Shorline.